以下還是我的美國(guó)朋友寫(xiě)的一篇例文,這片文章是關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)的,寫(xiě)的還不錯(cuò),很具借鑒價(jià)值的!
申明一點(diǎn),老外寫(xiě)文章也不是每篇都寫(xiě)的好的(就像中國(guó)人寫(xiě)中文文章也不是都寫(xiě)的好的),也會(huì)受題目?jī)?nèi)容的影響,所以有的文章大家還是要持學(xué)習(xí)和批判的雙重目的來(lái)看的.
下面這篇個(gè)人認(rèn)為,還屬于他寫(xiě)給我的不錯(cuò)的一篇.
The issue of environmental protection is becoming too big and far-reaching for individuals and any single nation to handle. Therefore, the issue can only be addressed from an international or global perspective. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The issue of environmental protection is becoming too large and far-reaching for individuals or any single nation to handle. Some believe therefore that the issue can only be addressed from an international or global perspective.（還是他犯的老錯(cuò)誤，brief introduction部分絕對(duì)不能照抄原題！否則要扣分，大家這點(diǎn)千萬(wàn)要搞清楚，不能被誤導(dǎo)了） As is the case with any issue having global impact however, and the elimination of the individual， the solution is highly debatable.
The actions of a single individual can do nothing to curb the swelling avalanche of environmental pollution overtaking our world.（紅色部分為主題句，下同） A single nation as well, depending on its individual contribution to global pollution can not make much of a difference acting alone against such a large problem. If the people of one nation were to entirely stop all forms of pollution this very day, it would still make only an infinitesimal difference in the scheme of things. A world lead by an organization encouraging reform however could spur real change but this organization cannot bring itself into being.
Change always starts small. A single individual while powerless alone has the ability to influence others and a group of people large enough and with a singular voice has the power to influence a nation. Likewise, influential nations acting in concert have the power to effect global change. The key to bringing about this chain reaction is engendering a consciousness and sense of responsibility toward the environment in a sufficient number of individuals; individuals who are not interested in stopping global pollution itself, but ensuring a healthy environment for themselves and their own progeny. People are the driving force of change.
Individuals must learn to appreciate the problem of global pollution on a personal level before they can take true responsibility for it. Assigning this responsibility to a global organization, while lending organization and clear direction to the solution, only further removes people from the problem.
請(qǐng)注意,這位老兄的思想我想不是每個(gè)人都理解的(有些地方我看的也無(wú)語(yǔ)了),所以我們要明白一點(diǎn),我請(qǐng)老外寫(xiě)文章不是要看他的結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容(這個(gè)我相信中國(guó)人絕對(duì)不比他們差),我們要學(xué)的是他的語(yǔ)言!有些句型和詞匯,我們可能看的懂,但永遠(yuǎn)想不到用,這才是我們最要借鑒的地方!!! |
